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Patricia Bagot

Created by HKAY2019 (talk) and Lirazelf (talk). Nominated by Zeromonk (talk) at 09:14, 30 September 2019 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg Hi Zeromonk, review follows: article moved to main space 28 September; article exceeds minimum length; article is cited inline throughout to reliable sources (though I note the two newspaper articles are actually identical, just printed in two different papers); hooks are interesting, mentioned in the article and check out to the sources cited; QPQ has been done.
I do however have some issues with the level of close paraphrasing from the newspaper sources. Some examples which are identical to the source:
  • "the only daughter of Captain Arthur Bagot, MC and Mary Bagot"
  • "was educated at Leith Academy, Edinburgh and from 1954 at [they city's] Mary Erskine School for girls, [Edinburgh]. She obtained an MA in psychology and philosophy from the University of Edinburgh and a diploma in sociological studies from"
  • "up housekey a web based directory of housing support services"
  • "she argued with Colonel Gaddafi about the quality of [proposed new] housing"
The article needs to be read through against the newspaper article and checked for similar. If these can be remedied this should be OK - Dumelow (talk) 10:12, 30 September 2019 (UTC)
  • Thanks Template:Reply to for the review - I’ve rewritten the sections of concern and found some more sources. Zeromonk (talk) 07:35, 2 October 2019 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg I think that's sorted it, thanks Zeromonk - Dumelow (talk) 20:08, 2 October 2019 (UTC)