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Revision as of 16:58, 29 January 2018 by imported>Alansohn (ALT1 is good to go)
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Rahway River Parkway
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that the Rahway River Parkway, designed by Olmstead Brothers, was the first project of the newly formed Union County parks commission?- ALT1:... that the Rahway River Parkway, designed by Olmstead Brothers in the 1920s, was a project of the newly-formed Union County parks commission?
Created by Djflem (talk). Self-nominated at 08:50, 16 January 2018 (UTC).
Template:Ping The article is new enough, long enough and properly sourced, with no issues of neutrality. Earwig rates this source as a potential close paraphrasing. The hook is within length and potentially interesting. While the Olmstead Brothers portion of the hook is sourced in the article, the statement in the hook "first project of the newly formed Union County parks commission" does not have a source in the article. I might have found this source from the NPS in a superficial search, but please confirm. A source in the article for the second clause of the hook and a QPQ are what stands before approval of this well-done article. Alansohn (talk) 17:36, 18 January 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Ping QPQ done. Don't know where I saw "first", so have cut that part of the hook. Did some slight rewording on the one source to address paraphrasing. Bare urls fixed. Djflem (talk) 17:19, 23 January 2018 (UTC)