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Revision as of 18:34, 5 September 2015 by imported>Jakec (cmt)
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Rolling Green Run
- ... that a golf course probably contributes to the impairment of Rolling Green Run?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/David J. Foulis
- Comment: It somehow seemed perfect, especially given the stream's name.
Moved to mainspace by Jakec (talk). Self-nominated at 02:01, 1 September 2015 (UTC).
This article is new enough and long enough. The hook fact has an inline citation, the article is neutral and does not contravene policy issues. Not a DYK issue, but this sentence needs attention to explain what the distance refers to - "Rolling Green Run joins the Susquehanna River 121.78 miles (195.99 km)." Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:58, 5 September 2015 (UTC)
- I'd imagined that it would be apparent that it's upriver of the Susquehanna River's mouth, since a) Rolling Green Run is not 121 miles long and b) the place where a creek joins a river is the creek's mouth, not a point upstream of it. I also tweaked the hook from plural to singular since there appears to be only one golf course in the watershed. --Jakob (talk) aka Jakec 18:34, 5 September 2015 (UTC)