Template:Did you know nominations/Roma Agrawal

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Roma Agrawal

Measuring just over a thousand feet, the Shard is the tallest building in the UK
Measuring just over a thousand feet, the Shard is the tallest building in the UK
  • ... that Roma Agrawal played with LEGO and then designed both the tip and bottom of the Shard (pictured)?

Created by Jesswade88 (talk) and Zeromonk (talk). Nominated by Andrew Davidson (talk) at 18:13, 6 October 2017 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Timing OK, long enough, no copyvio or plagiarism. Unfortunately the information from the hook doesn't seem to be contained in the article-- or at least, the hook seems to suggest she played with Lego to design the Shard; but the article suggests she played with Lego as a child and then some decades later designed the Shard. Can you rework to make that clearer? Otherwise it's a great little tidbit, and the rest of the article is good to go! Owlsmcgee (talk) 22:14, 6 October 2017 (UTC)
ALT1: ... that after playing with LEGO as a child, Roma Agrawal designed both the tip and bottom of the Shard (pictured)? --Usernameunique (talk) 14:06, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
  • The wording of ALT1 seems fine but I'd prefer that we only link to the subject. LEGO is quite famous already and so doesn't need a link. Andrew D. (talk) 21:15, 18 October 2017 (UTC)