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Sakura-Variationen

Lachenmann in 2017
Lachenmann in 2017

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 22:07, 4 December 2018 (UTC).

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  • Symbol question.svg Just to say, hook is not very 'hooky' because of the assorted non-key info it contains - also ' about the cherry blossom' is not quite idiomatic English - why not just
My personal feeling is that this is neater, I'm not strenuously objecting. Best, Smerus (talk) 11:13, 15 December 2018 (UTC)
Thank you for offering, - neater - no doubt, but why drop the rather unusual scoring, and the children, which probably made him write a rather accessible piece for a change. Hosokawa also used the cherry blossom song, probably others as well, - I always try to say something unique for the person. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:10, 15 December 2018 (UTC)
  • I edited the lead to sort out all those clauses. I suggest writing the hook this way:
  • ALT0a: ... that Helmut Lachenmann (pictured) composed Sakura-Variationen, a trio for saxophone, piano, and percussion based on a Japanese folk song about the cherry blossom, for a children's concert? Yoninah (talk) 20:54, 23 December 2018 (UTC)