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Serene Velocity
... that Serene Velocity, a film of a basement hallway, was inducted into the U.S. National Film Registry?Source: "In 2001, the United States Library of Congress deemed the film 'culturally significant' and named it to the National Film Registry." ([1])
5x expanded by Hinnk (talk). Self-nominated at 04:25, 17 September 2017 (UTC).
5x expansion verified. New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. Hook ref verified and cited inline – however, I think you have a better hook here:- ALT1: ... that after viewing footage from his 1970 film Serene Velocity, director Ernie Gehr felt nauseated?
- The paragraph under Description needs at least one cite, per Rule D2. Since the nominator has many DYK credits, a QPQ is needed here. Yoninah (talk) 15:08, 17 September 2017 (UTC)
- Template:U, added a citation needed tag. Once you provide a citation and QPQ, you're good to go. --Usernameunique (talk) 11:02, 19 September 2017 (UTC)
- QPQ is Cerebratulus lacteus. ALT1 definitely works, I would just change nauseous → nauseated (I corrected this in the article too). The "Description" section began without any secondary sources as a "plot description", but it clearly grew beyond that; I can cite it later this week once I dig up my original notes. hinnk (talk) 03:49, 27 September 2017 (UTC)
- Citations added now. hinnk (talk) 06:46, 3 October 2017 (UTC)
Issues are addressed, so approving ALT1. --Usernameunique (talk) 19:11, 9 October 2017 (UTC)