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Sexy Lady (Jessie J song), No. 7 (brand)
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- ... that "Sexy Lady" by Jessie J charted at #22 on the UK Singles Chart on the back of digital downloads after it was featured in a Boots No. 7 advert despite the fact that it was not physically released as a single?
Created by Launchballer (talk). Self nominated at 13:34, 26 November 2013 (UTC).
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That is not a sufficient review. The second article, No. 7 (brand), was not in the section heading and didn't have an article history link or a {{DYKmake}} (all of which I've now corrected), so it could have easily been missed. The "review" does not say whether both articles have been checked. Also, the hook is a little too long. MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 21:17, 2 December 2013 (UTC)
- Sexy Lady (Jessie J song) article - created new/moved on 26 November, so new enough and neutral; 1823 characters of readable prose but over 600 characters of those are quotes, so I would like to see more text and it also needs an inline citation for the 'Chart performance' section.
- No. 7 (brand) article - moved to main space on 1 December, so also new enough; 1677 characters but 448 seem to be copied from the Boots UK article and 280 are a quote, so I'd say this one also needs more text.
- Hook - I can't actually see the references supporting the "on the back of digital downloads" part of the hook (maybe I'm not reading this correctly though!)?
- QPQs - I've just had a very quick flick through Launchballer's talk page and one archive and it looks as if there are quite a number of DYK credits, so I think this nomination also needs two QPQs?
I fixed a couple of DAB links; I've left a note on Launchballer's talk page. SagaciousPhil - Chat 11:56, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
- Lengths - I'll get onto that immediately.
- Just checked the hook, it's 216 characters so removing the bit about "digital downloads" seems the obvious answer.
- ALT1: ... that "Sexy Lady" by Jessie J charted at #22 on the UK Singles Chart after it was featured in a Boots No. 7 advert despite the fact that it was not physically released as a single?
- See User talk:BlueMoonset#QPQs. I've had a recent problem with them, I'm working my way through them.--Launchballer 13:23, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
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- Template:Did you know nominations/Lilian Bland--Launchballer 13:56, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) Thanks for responding so promptly, Launchballer, if you drop a quick note here when you have everything in place, I'll check through everything again. SagaciousPhil - Chat 14:00, 4 December 2013 (UTC)