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Sodder children disappearance

Photo claimed to be Louis Sodder
Photo claimed to be Louis Sodder

Created by Daniel Case (talk). Self-nominated at 17:52, 8 December 2015 (UTC).

Template:Ping why would you do something like that? Do you think that every article tied to a date has to be included in Selected Anniversaries? Your decisions on DYK hooks are becoming disruptive. Yoninah (talk) 21:59, 19 December 2015 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Excellent work, as always. New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. A few comments:
  • Why isn't this called Disappearance of Sodder children in keeping with other page titles?
I followed the example of Beaumont children disappearance, which like this one sounds less awkward when we're dealing with multiple persons. Daniel Case (talk) 23:53, 19 December 2015 (UTC)
  • IMO all of the hooks are wordy and clunky. Please also remember that the majority of hooks on December 24 will be about Christmas, so maybe this hook shouldn't be so graphic. Could you offer another suggestion?
There are several alts that aren't graphic. Were they not enough? Daniel Case (talk) 23:53, 19 December 2015 (UTC)
I'll do another one. Daniel Case (talk) 23:53, 19 December 2015 (UTC)