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Soraya Syed

Created/expanded by Remonaaly (talk). Nominated by Fauzan (talk) at 16:50, 24 May 2015 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg New enough and long enough. A lot of content is unreferenced, an especially bad thing since this is a BLP. --Jakob (talk) aka Jakec 20:33, 25 May 2015 (UTC)
  • Which sections specifically could do with more references? Remonaaly (talk)
Ping Template:U --Fauzan✆ talk✉ mail 04:37, 2 June 2015 (UTC)
  • 2nd paragraph in "Education and training", last sentence of 3rd paragraph in "Education and training", and the 1st paragraph "Career" all have no citations. I'm also not sure that so many images of her work can fall under fair use, though I'm willing to defer to an expert on that one.. Speaking of fair use, evidence of permission should be provided for the picture of Syed herself (fair use is almost never appropriate for images of living people). --Jakob (talk) aka Jakec 20:13, 2 June 2015 (UTC)
  • integrates is vague -- what does that mean in this context? EEng (talk) 08:13, 26 May 2015 (UTC)

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Template:U, you can visit the website of the artict and look at her works to get an idea, meanwhile I have put up an alt. --Fauzan✆ talk✉ mail 14:30, 1 June 2015 (UTC)
Way better. Thanks. EEng (talk) 14:31, 1 June 2015 (UTC)
Wait! Template:U, isn't a hook expected to be mysterious and present something unknown that attracts the reader? --Fauzan✆ talk✉ mail 14:47, 1 June 2015 (UTC)
Yes it is. Personally I read ALT1 and think, "Hmm... I think of calligraphy as something down with a fountain pen, or brush. I wonder what these new technologies could be?" EEng (talk) 15:01, 1 June 2015 (UTC)
OK, then, I too feel the same on reconsidering. --Fauzan✆ talk✉ mail 15:13, 1 June 2015 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Several paragraphs still have no cites at all, per Rule D2: 2nd paragraph under "Education and training", first and last paragraphs under "Career". The hook is also too general. You could write:
  • ALT2: ... that classically-trained Islamic calligrapher Soraya Syed (pictured) incorporates modern technologies such as holography in her art? Yoninah (talk) 21:11, 8 June 2015 (UTC)
Template:U, have a look at the article now. ALT2 looks better. --Fauzan✆ talk✉ mail 07:58, 11 June 2015 (UTC)
  • Frankly, this article is based on a lot of non-reliable sources like blogs, and it's not clear to me that she's even notable per WP:ARTIST. I went through the article and removed all the non-reliable sources. A few paragraphs now have no references again. Yoninah (talk) 01:16, 12 June 2015 (UTC)
  • Symbol delete vote.svg Concerns have not been addressed. --Jakob (talk) aka Jakec 11:41, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

Template:Outdent I have undone the close because the page creator added a bunch of references on July 7. Perhaps he didn't know to inform us here at DYK. I know it because I left the page on my watchlist. I would like to re-review the nomination. Yoninah (talk) 19:25, 8 July 2015 (UTC)