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Talal al-Sharif
- ... that after firing an AK-47 in the House of Representatives, Jordanian Representative Talal al-Sharif was expelled as a member?
- Reviewed: Consulate General of the United States, Hyderabad
- Comment: I'm open to rewriting the hook. Maybe something as the following is better: ... that after pulling an AK-47 during an argument, Jordanian Representative Talal al-Sharif, fired it in the House of Representatives and was consequently expelled?
Created by Crispulop (talk). Self nominated at 11:26, 18 October 2013 (UTC).
- Nothing wrong with hook, but I have edited to remove BLP issues over his alleged intent, & updated - he was still in jail on 28 October. Johnbod (talk) 15:02, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
- I've just seen this rule in the DYK criteria (4a): "Articles and hooks that focus unduly on negative aspects of living individuals or promote one side of an ongoing dispute should be avoided." If someone believes this is too negative I will gladly withdraw this nomination altogether. Crispulop (talk) 22:15, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
Needs full review. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:29, 15 November 2013 (UTC)