Template:Did you know nominations/The Great Plane Robbery

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The Great Plane Robbery

Created by Taylor Trescott (talk). Self nominated at 13:36, 21 September 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Long-enough article with an interesting hook. Well-cited throughout body, with no copyvio. Fit for the main. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 14:33, 21 September 2013 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg I don't find an unknown person commenting on irony to be very interesting. I'd like to suggest a far more direct approach:
That hook is fine by me. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 19:10, 26 September 2013 (UTC)
  • Wouldn't simply writing "fear of flying" or "afraid of flying" be more accessible to the MP audience? — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:53, 28 September 2013 (UTC)
Sure. I've updated the original hook. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 00:55, 28 September 2013 (UTC)
  • And the alt? Otherwise looks good to go. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:15, 28 September 2013 (UTC)
  • I'll strike the ALT, since the original hook has been modified into a simplified version of the ALT. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:35, 28 September 2013 (UTC)