Template:Did you know nominations/The Sacred Twenty

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The Sacred Twenty

Group photograph of the first twenty Navy Nurses, appointed in 1908, in front of the Naval Hospital in Washington D.C.

  • Reviewed: Wim T. Schippers
  • Comment: Article created in userspace on 26 October, article moved to articlespace on 28 October.

Created by I JethroBT (talk). Self nominated at 17:27, 1 November 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Very interesting topic and well written article, but the sentence that supports the hook does not seem to have a citation. Lankiveil (speak to me) 09:12, 2 November 2013 (UTC).
Sure-- I've sourced the statement with an existing source in the article. I, JethroBT drop me a line 16:11, 2 November 2013 (UTC)
Per the list provided by User:Allen3 here, I stopped by to check for compliance with medical sourcing. I don't see health-related statements in the article that would engage MEDRS, so I will not contribute a full review here, but what stands out immediately is a) why is there a "The" in the article title (see WP:MSH and there are other MSH issues), and b) the hook needs to be copyedited (even ?), and c) the source cannot be verified unless one has the book, and in such cases, I would request a quote to verify that the source is accurately represented (I realize it is customary at DYK to AGF on hooks, but I don't see any harm in asking that the editor place the quote from the source here for verification-- I would want to particularly verify the word "most" in the hook.) SandyGeorgia (Talk) 19:14, 4 November 2013 (UTC)