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Tourist attractions in Udaipur
- ... that the Sajjangarh Biological Park, one of the Tourist attractions in Udaipur had received more than 46,000 visitors in a month, generating a revenue of Rs 14 lakh for the forest department, which is a record in itself?
- Reviewed: Sajjangarh Biological Park
5x expanded by Vishal0soni (talk). Nominated by Vishal0soni (talk) at 06:34, 30 August 2015 (UTC).
Dan arndt (talk) 06:04, 4 September 2015 (UTC)
- The article is new enough created two days before nomination
- The article is relatively short (approx 1,700 characters) if you exclude the table of fees & charges (which appears to be more travel information/guide) but mets the 1,500 criteria. I would prefer to see more substance to the article as it is a borderline stub article.
- The article contains a number of grammatical errors
- There are also a number of significant statements within the article lacking inline citations
- The article contains a number of local terms that should be linked, to enable readers to understand what is being described.
- The hook is relatively wordy (coming in at almost 220 characters) and tries to pack in too much information.
- In respect to the hook, as the reference indicates that the park was only open for two months the early attendance figures are always likely to set a record as there is nothing to compare against (apart from the preceding month). ·
