Template:Did you know nominations/Well-Manicured Man
< Template:Did you know nominations
Jump to navigation
Jump to search
Revision as of 22:27, 9 January 2012 by imported>Grapple X
Well-Manicured Man
- ... that the "unnervingly genteel" Well-Manicured Man calls to mind the works of Wagner?
- Reviewed: Adam Cunnington
- Comment: Nomination is for the 2012 WikiCup
Created/expanded by Grapple X (talk). Self nom at 09:34, 7 January 2012 (UTC)
Article length, expansion and age are OK, I see no problems with source or copyvio, but....content is not accurate - citation in article does not say that WMM 'calls to mind the works of Wagner', only that one critic has called his monologue 'a Wagnerian demonstration of the art of declamation' (whatever that may mean) - Try a different hook?--Smerus (talk) 15:59, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- "Calls to mind the works of Wagner" is just a paraphrasing of his delivery being called "Wagnerian", but if citations have to be that precise then what about Alt1: ... that the Well-Manicured Man had his suicide contemplated for him?" GRAPPLE X 17:47, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- It is not clear to me exactly what this means - do you mean, for example, Alt2: ... that the scriptwriters for the television series The X-Files considered a variety of possible suicide methods for the character, the Well-Manicured Man ? --Smerus (talk) 22:24, 9 January 2012 (UTC)