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What a Beautiful Name

  • Comment: Request appearance on Main Page for 1/28/18 which is the Grammy Awards broadcast

5x expanded by Lionelt (talk). Self-nominated at 12:22, 11 January 2018 (UTC).

  • Template:Re I will review this article. I tweaked the hooks a bit for formatting. epicgenius (talk) 19:14, 11 January 2018 (UTC)

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There are a few concerns, for instance:
  • In "Reception", words like "observes" and "points out" are words to watch. Use extra care with these words: if you mean "said", then use "said".
    • Fixed Reception.– Lionel(talk) 08:52, 12 January 2018 (UTC)
  • In "Other versions", Template:Tq - elite by which standard?
    • Put it in quotes and added inline reference.– Lionel(talk) 08:52, 12 January 2018 (UTC)
But this is not a good article review, and these neutrality issues are minor.
You might need to copyedit this a little. I see grammatical errors like "it's" (for "its"), and some run-on sentences.
  • Grammar fixed. Run-ons fixed.– Lionel(talk) 08:52, 12 January 2018 (UTC)
QPQ: You need one because you have 16 previous DYKs, and a QP Qis required for more than 5.
Template:Re Thank you for fixing these issues. However, there are a few citation needed tags now. These all appear to be minor, since you can copy the citations from the "Charts" section. epicgenius (talk) 14:53, 12 January 2018 (UTC)
I used paragraph referencing per WP:CITEDENSE and removed the tags. If editor objects no problem to cite each sentence but I do think it's overkill.– Lionel(talk) 08:18, 13 January 2018 (UTC)
Template:Re That's fine. There's still one unsourced statement in the lead: the quote about the "genre-smashing single" (although you can just reuse reference #10, "The Year in Christian & Gospel Charts: Hillsong Worship & Tamela Mann Lead Lists"). epicgenius (talk) 16:11, 13 January 2018 (UTC)
Oh! Ok, fixed. Thank you for your patience! – Lionel(talk) 07:24, 14 January 2018 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg All right, this is good to go. epicgenius (talk) 23:48, 14 January 2018 (UTC)