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What a Beautiful Name
- ... that "What a Beautiful Name" represents the first Grammy nomination for Hillsong Worship? [1]
ALT1:... that the Voices of Lee cover of "What a Beautiful Name" went viral and amassed 5 million views in two days? [2]
- Comment: Request appearance on Main Page for 1/28/18 which is the Grammy Awards broadcast
5x expanded by Lionelt (talk). Self-nominated at 12:22, 11 January 2018 (UTC).
- Template:Re I will review this article. I tweaked the hooks a bit for formatting. epicgenius (talk) 19:14, 11 January 2018 (UTC)
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- There are a few concerns, for instance:
In "Reception", words like "observes" and "points out" are words to watch. Use extra care with these words: if you mean "said", then use "said".In "Other versions", Template:Tq - elite by which standard?
But this is not a good article review, and these neutrality issues are minor.You might need to copyedit this a little. I see grammatical errors like "it's" (for "its"), and some run-on sentences.QPQ: You need one because you have 16 previous DYKs, and a QP Qis required for more than 5.- Ok, main hook :-)
- QPQ here: Template:Did you know nominations/Margaret L. Curry – Lionel(talk) 08:52, 12 January 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Re Thank you for fixing these issues. However, there are a few citation needed tags now. These all appear to be minor, since you can copy the citations from the "Charts" section. epicgenius (talk) 14:53, 12 January 2018 (UTC)
- I used paragraph referencing per WP:CITEDENSE and removed the tags. If editor objects no problem to cite each sentence but I do think it's overkill.– Lionel(talk) 08:18, 13 January 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Re That's fine. There's still one unsourced statement in the lead: the quote about the "genre-smashing single" (although you can just reuse reference #10, "The Year in Christian & Gospel Charts: Hillsong Worship & Tamela Mann Lead Lists"). epicgenius (talk) 16:11, 13 January 2018 (UTC)
- Oh! Ok, fixed. Thank you for your patience! – Lionel(talk) 07:24, 14 January 2018 (UTC)
All right, this is good to go. epicgenius (talk) 23:48, 14 January 2018 (UTC)
- Oh! Ok, fixed. Thank you for your patience! – Lionel(talk) 07:24, 14 January 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Re That's fine. There's still one unsourced statement in the lead: the quote about the "genre-smashing single" (although you can just reuse reference #10, "The Year in Christian & Gospel Charts: Hillsong Worship & Tamela Mann Lead Lists"). epicgenius (talk) 16:11, 13 January 2018 (UTC)
- I used paragraph referencing per WP:CITEDENSE and removed the tags. If editor objects no problem to cite each sentence but I do think it's overkill.– Lionel(talk) 08:18, 13 January 2018 (UTC)