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White Wonderland
- ...that the former co-organizer of an electronic music festival began holding its own competing event on the exact same night?
- Reviewed: I Shall Not Be Moved (poetry)
Created by ViperSnake151 (talk). Self nominated at 01:53, 26 July 2013 (UTC).
- I have not reviewed the article, but I have concerns about the effectiveness of the proposed hook. It's too vague, and it focuses too much on the non-target article. I suggest the following revision:
- ALT1 ...that the first White Wonderland music festival was held on the same night as a competing festival that its sponsor had co-organized? --Orlady (talk) 16:08, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
- I'm okay with it if it says "previously co-organized", and if "same night" is linked to New Year's Eve (because that's a key aspect of why this makes sense). ViperSnake151 Talk 16:17, 26 July 2013 (UTC)