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Šime Budinić
... that, based on Cyrillic and Glagolitic, in his 1582 work Šime Budinić added Czech diacritics to Latin script with intention to use literary language understandible for most South Slavs?
Created by Antidiskriminator (talk). Self-nominated at 23:57, 24 May 2015 (UTC).
- ALT1:... that Šime Budinić created complex literary language based on Cyrillic and Glagolitic by addition of the Czech diacritics to Latin script in order to penetrate as much South Slavs as possible?
Template:U, What do you think about ALT1?--Antidiskriminator (talk) 07:15, 27 May 2015 (UTC)
- Well, "penetrate as much South Slavs as possible" makes no sense, and the article says the same thing so I just don't know what to tell you to do. I think you need to find a native English speaker to copyedit the article for you, and then reconsider the hook. The nomination can go on hold while you get this done. EEng (talk) 22:32, 27 May 2015 (UTC)
- ALT2:... that Šime Budinić created complex literary language based on Cyrillic and Glagolitic by addition of the Czech diacritics to Latin script in order to be used by as much South Slavs as possible?
- Template:U, thanks for advice which I followed (diff) and requested copy editing at GOCE. What do you think about ALT2?--Antidiskriminator (talk) 06:18, 28 May 2015 (UTC)
Why don't you ping me when the copyedit is done and we'll think about hooks then. EEng (talk) 12:08, 28 May 2015 (UTC)
- Ok. --Antidiskriminator (talk) 12:36, 28 May 2015 (UTC)