Template:Did you know nominations/18th Arizona Territorial Legislature
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Revision as of 15:40, 25 September 2012 by imported>Abyssal
18th Arizona Territorial Legislature
- ... that for two years following the 18th Arizona Territorial Legislature, territorial auditors lacked legal authority to make payments because the normal appropriation bills were not passed?
Created/expanded by Allen3 (talk). Self nom at 23:17, 10 September 2012 (UTC)
The article itself is okay, but the hook might benefit from some attention. The overly formal vocabulary dilutes its hooky interest. Most of our readers probably won't known what an appropriation bill is, for instance. I think it could be rephrased to make it a bit easier to understand and attract attention. Abyssal (talk) 15:40, 25 September 2012 (UTC)