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Revision as of 02:31, 15 June 2012 by imported>Chris857 (review)
1912 Brooklands Flanders Monoplane crash
- ... that the first report into an aviation accident was produced in June 1912?
Created/expanded by Mjroots (talk). Self nom at 19:39, 12 June 2012 (UTC)
- New article, all edits over about 3 days.
- 1750 B of prose
- Neutral tone, just lays out the facts
- Inline citations employed
- Source quality wise, there is a major newspaper, a govt website, and two sources listed at Wikipedia:WikiProject Aviation/Resources, so I assume their reliability.
- Sources match article for most part, AGF on offline
- I do not see any close paraphrasing
- Hook is brief and interesting
- I'm undecided about how the hook links to the article, but it seems okay
Remaining issues
- QPQ necessary
- Ref 1 does not explicitly mention model numbers (F.3 and D.4). This isn't a deal breaker, but if they could be sourced, it would be nice. Looking at the relevant Wikipedia articles, I agree that those should be the models by seating and horsepower, respectively.
- As an aside, Chrome does not like ref 1, but IE8 handles it fine. Chris857 (talk) 02:31, 15 June 2012 (UTC)