Template:Did you know nominations/1951 Hawaii cyclone

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by  — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:41, 30 June 2014 (UTC)

1951 Hawaii cyclone

  • Comment: Going to review another DYK, even though I don't have to QPQ. (Start training :P)

Moved to mainspace by CycloneIsaac (talk). Self nominated at 21:36, 11 June 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg New enough, long enough, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. I'm wondering, though, where you got all that information in the first paragraph under Meteorological history – are you interpreting the statistical charts in footnotes 2 and 3? Per DYK rules, you need to add a cite after the sentences describing the second and third landfalls. Also, I suggest adding "in 1951" to the hook to place it in context. No QPQ needed for under-5 DYKs nominator. Yoninah (talk) 20:31, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
  • I added a few more cites to footnotes 2 and 3 for the other two landfalls. I am proposing an alt hook, with your suggestion.
ALT 1:...that in 1951, a cyclone made landfall in Hawaii three times?
CycloneIsaac (Talk) 20:56, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
  • Thank you. What about my question about the statistical data? Yoninah (talk) 21:34, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
  • IBTRACS and best track are statistical data, and I was interpreting it.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 23:08, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol voting keep.svg OK. The hook cites are both online, but I have to AGF your interpretations of the data. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 23:42, 29 June 2014 (UTC)