Template:Did you know nominations/1985–86 Hormel strike

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1985–86 Hormel strike

Improved to Good Article status by JJonahJackalope (talk). Self-nominated at 18:24, 4 November 2020 (UTC).

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  • Both hooks interesting, but the first one is a bit confusing, I had to read it twice, wondering if we can tweak that. —valereee (talk) 12:53, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Jackson hook is cited, the other has a source sentence The strike was later the subject of a 2020 stage play written by Philip Dawkins for the Children's Theatre Company called Spamtown, USA, which focused on the children of several Hormel workers on different sides of the strike. that needs a citation. —valereee (talk) 12:56, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
Thanks for the review, as far as the first hook is concerned, I see that I really could have made it clearer. How about this:
But also, I think I'd probably prefer to use ALT1 as the hook, though with "had" replaced by "has", such that:
Sources for this hook can be found at the following places: [2] (Academy Award-winning film) and [3] (stage play). Thanks! JJonahJackalope (talk) 03:01, 6 November 2020 (UTC)