Template:Did you know nominations/2012 SCO summit

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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:47, 1 July 2012 (UTC)

2012 SCO summit

Chinese President Hu Jintao
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  • Reviewed: Samestate
  • Comment: The summit concludes on the 7th, and i dont expect itll get posted soon, so we could change the hook if anything special happens (or this doesnt happn). There also is the logo for the summit, if that image were to be used

Created/expanded by Lihaas (talk). Self nom at 12:00, 5 June 2012 (UTC)

  • 16px New enough and long enough. Now that the summit is over, the hook and some of the article needs to be put into the past tense and be updated (I'm thinking particularly about the 'Agenda' section in the article). The lead is very short, and needs to be more like a summary of the article (per MOS:LEAD, not really a failable issue, but it would improve the readability of the article greatly). There is uncited content in the 'Agenda' section (second paragraph), there should be a citation for the quote by Cheng Guoping. I think that's it. Quasihuman (talk • contribs) 13:54, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
DoneLihaas (talk) 16:12, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
We still need a source that says that Afghanistan and Turkey were brought into the union in some way, the current source predates the summit, and just says that this is on the agenda. If this didn't actually happen during the summit, maybe a different hook would be better. Quasihuman (talk • contribs) 16:51, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
Feel free to suggest/change the hook.
Also updated.Lihaas (talk) 13:49, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
  • 16px Good to go, but I suggest the following change to the hook to bring it into the past tense and be more specific (still falling well short of the 200 character mark):
  • Alt1... that the 2012 SCO summit (host pictured) brought Afghanistan and Turkey into the supranational union as observer and dialogue partner respectively.