Template:Did you know nominations/Aaron Schoenke

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Aaron Schoenke

Created/expanded by MichaelQSchmidt (talk). Self nom at 10:25, 6 May 2012 (UTC)

  • Symbol delete vote.svg I'm sorry, but article was created on 29 April, while you did not nominate it before 6 May. Nomination must be done within 5 days of creation or 5x expansion, so this one fails the criteria. Mentoz86 (talk) 20:52, 11 May 2012 (UTC)
  • Never mind, misread. I got it all wrong, you moved it from userspace on 2 May, so that's ok. But you shouldn't add this nomination to 29 April, 2 May is the correct here.

Symbol possible vote.svg I can't find the source that backs up the hook. Please enlighten me, or rewrite the hook. It should also be mentioned that "The hook fact must be cited in the article with an inline citation to a reliable source" Mentoz86 (talk) 21:03, 11 May 2012 (UTC)

Did both. I modified and sourced the first sentence in Aaron Schoenke#Recognition, adding the citations that review his work. One in particular states in praising the filmmaker, states "everything from the make-up design to the choreography is enough to place it head and shoulders above other fan films" and "Schoenke is in another league altogether."[1] I also then modified hook above accordingly.[2] Schmidt, MICHAEL Q. 04:15, 13 May 2012 (UTC)
I still have some concerns, I'm afraid. First of - the text hook from the hook is not in the article (in another league altogether) as far as I can see. Second: Is Film School Rejects regarded as a reliable source? I have no problems with it being used as a source in the article, but the hook should be backed up by a reliable source. And a couple of minor details about the article: Is it necessary with all those refs in the lead, when that is almost the same sentance as the first in "Recognition"? And shouldn't the "Filmography" section also be cited? Mentoz86 (talk) 22:38, 13 May 2012 (UTC)