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Ankita Bhakat
... that in 2017, Indian female archer Ankita Bhakat won a gold medal at the Youth World Archery Championships, becoming only the fourth Indian to do so?[1]: "Template:Tq- ALT1: ... that in 2017, Indian female archer Ankita Bhakat won a gold medal at the Youth World Archery Championships, the fourth time India had won a gold at that competition?
Created by MBlaze Lightning (talk). Self-nominated at 11:55, 24 September 2018 (UTC).
This article is new enough and long enough. The article is neutral and I detected no close paraphrasing, although my check was limited by the fact that Earwig was not working. I'm bothered about the original hook and have added ALT1 as an alternative. She wasn't the fourth Indian to win at the Youth World Archery Championships, but the third, because Deepika Kumari had won on two occasions. Template:Ping What do you think? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:14, 1 October 2018 (UTC)
- Yeah, right, thanks. Not sure what was going on in my mind when I wrote the original hook. MBlaze Lightning 08:00, 2 October 2018 (UTC)
Approving ALT1 and striking the original hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:19, 2 October 2018 (UTC)
Could we tighten this?- ALT1a:
... that in 2017, Indian female archer Ankita Bhakat won her country's fourth gold medal at the Youth World Archery Championships?Yoninah (talk) 15:17, 25 October 2018 (UTC)
- Or:
- ALT2: ... that Indian female archer Ankita Bhakat, who entered the 2017 World Archery Youth Championships seeded ninth, won India's fourth overall world youth championships title? Yoninah (talk) 15:23, 25 October 2018 (UTC)
- Sorry for the delayed response, I was busy in real life. Thanks for coming up with the new hooks, Template:U. They certainly sounds better than the original one. Since only one of them will hit the main page, I'd prefer the latter because it is more descriptive. MBlaze Lightning 05:28, 27 October 2018 (UTC)
- There is no need to call her a "female archer". She is an "archer". Recommend ALT3: ... that Indian archer Ankita Bhakat, who entered the 2017 World Archery Youth Championships seeded ninth, won India's fourth overall world youth championships title? MurielMary (talk) 00:34, 15 November 2018 (UTC)
Approving ALT1a and ALT2. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:30, 26 October 2018 (UTC)