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Bhagat Singh Kranti Sena

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• ... that Bal Thackeray praised Bhagat Singh Kranti Sena for attacking Prashant Bhushan due to his controversial statement on the Kashmir issue?

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Created/expanded by Vibhijain (talk). Self nom at 15:04, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

• I made some edits to the page for neutrality (wasn't intentional, but the way certain events were cast as "attacks" were a little POVish in the original articles), and I think the large quote from the group's page should probably be shortened. But the hook checks out, the age was acceptable at the time of nomination, and length is OK. All sources checked out OK. I would propose a slightly shorter hook since the praise is not what is notworthy:

ALT1: ... that three members of Bhagat Singh Kranti Sena assaulted Prashant Bhushan due to his controversial statement on the Kashmir issue? Cmprince (talk) 13:57, 29 June 2012 (UTC)

• Is the new ALT1 okay with the creator/nominator? I was about to promote this when I realized there hadn't been an answer to the proposed alternate, which I do prefer to the original hook, so I've passed it over for now. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:16, 2 July 2012 (UTC)

• Yeah, its fine. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ ^{Talk Email} 07:50, 2 July 2012 (UTC)