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Revision as of 05:27, 19 January 2014 by imported>PFHLai (to P4)
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 05:27, 19 January 2014 (UTC)
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Black-breasted Thrush
- ... that the Black-breasted ThrushTemplate:`s (male pictured) breeding time differs depending on which country they are situated in?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Luis Garcia (pitcher)
- Comment: Featured picture – will make a nice lead hook.
5x expanded by Bloom6132 (talk). Self nominated at 00:46, 16 January 2014 (UTC).
Template:Ping This is a nice article, a former stub expanded x5. The article is long enough and has been expanded recently enough, with sufficient referencing. The hook is interesting, but I'd cut off the end as it is a little confusing at the moment - i.e. remove the "even though they are concentrated..." bit. The image is encyclopedic, used in the article (an FP as well) - no obvious close paraphrasing. If you would be happy to change the hook per my suggestions, or explain why I'm wrong (which is highly probable), then I'd be more than happy to green-tick this! :) Acather96 (click here to contact me) 19:21, 16 January 2014 (UTC)
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- Thanks for the quick response - looks like this is
good to go! :) Acather96 (click here to contact me) 19:50, 16 January 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks for the quick response - looks like this is
