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Black-breasted Thrush
- ... that the Black-breasted ThrushTemplate:`s (male pictured) breeding time differs depending on which country they are situated in?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Luis Garcia (pitcher)
- Comment: Featured picture – will make a nice lead hook.
5x expanded by Bloom6132 (talk). Self nominated at 00:46, 16 January 2014 (UTC).
Template:Ping This is a nice article, a former stub expanded x5. The article is long enough and has been expanded recently enough, with sufficient referencing. The hook is interesting, but I'd cut off the end as it is a little confusing at the moment - i.e. remove the "even though they are concentrated..." bit. The image is encyclopedic, used in the article (an FP as well) - no obvious close paraphrasing. If you would be happy to change the hook per my suggestions, or explain why I'm wrong (which is highly probable), then I'd be more than happy to green-tick this! :) Acather96 (click here to contact me) 19:21, 16 January 2014 (UTC)
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- Thanks for the quick response - looks like this is
good to go! :) Acather96 (click here to contact me) 19:50, 16 January 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks for the quick response - looks like this is
