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Blackrock (film)
- ... that Blackrock has incorrectly been considered to be a factual account of the murder of Leigh Leigh?
- Reviewed: Wimmenau
Improved to Good Article status by Freikorp (talk). Self nominated at 13:19, 13 January 2015 (UTC).
Nice work with the article, recently promoted to GA statues, meet policies and QPQ is done. Both hooks are interested but I'll go with the first one. --Captain Assassin! «T ♦ C ♦ G» 04:44, 6 February 2015 (UTC)
Returning to noms area. The hook fact is not sourced in the article. The play was opposed by the family for its fictionalization; the film was opposed by the family for "trivialising and exploiting her death, and portraying her negatively". Yoninah (talk) 10:54, 10 February 2015 (UTC)
- I preferred ALT1 anyway. Removing original hook and replacing with ALT1. I've made sure this hook has an inline citation and is 100% accurate. Template:Ping. Freikorp (talk) 20:59, 10 February 2015 (UTC)
Thank you, that's much better. Hook ref verified and cited inline. I would suggest a slight tweak to get rid of the passive voice:- ALT1: ... that filmgoers incorrectly believed that Blackrock was a factual account of the murder of Leigh Leigh? Yoninah (talk) 21:16, 10 February 2015 (UTC)