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Revision as of 01:55, 19 April 2012 by imported>KAVEBEAR
Cherimoya (horse)
- ... that Cherimoya won the 1911 Epsom Oaks (pictured) in the only start of her career?
- Reviewed: John N. Shive
Created/expanded by Froggerlaura (talk). Self nom at 19:30, 15 April 2012 (UTC)
Overall, I like the article, but the hook could be better. How about something like ALT1: ... that CherimoyaTemplate:`s unanticipated victory at the 1911 Epsom Oaks (pictured), the only start of her career, left "the spectators too dumbfounded to cheer"? --KAVEBEAR (talk) 08:02, 18 April 2012 (UTC)
- I like the ALT hook. Froggerlaura ribbit 17:26, 18 April 2012 (UTC)
