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David Asante-Apeatu
- ... that after spending time in Sarajevo, Lyon and The Gambia teaching, chasing criminals and serial killers, David Asante-Apeatu is now the highest ranking police officer in Ghana? Source: this and that
- ALT1 ... that David Asante-Apeatu, a former Inspector of Factories, once oversaw an operation that lead to the seizure 588 kilograms of cocaine worth millions of dollars?
Created by Crosstemplejay (talk). Self-nominated at 12:36, 28 June 2017 (UTC).
- Oppose The article reads like a CV. Furthermore, the proposed hook is poor. The article doesn't mention teaching, it trivialises police work, and as if that wasn't enough, the hook is essentially telling us that a policeman does police work and has a rank. You don't say. --Dweller (talk) Become old fashioned! 09:39, 13 July 2017 (UTC)
- Though I do not agree with your assertion that the article reads like a CV, I have reworded certain sections of it and proposed an alternative hook. It is sometimes very difficulty writing an African article to be like a Western article due largely to lack of extensive coverage on penitent issues and individuals. Please go through and offer your opinion. CrossTemple Jay 16:38, 13 July 2017 (UTC)