Template:Did you know nominations/David Asante-Apeatu

From blackwiki
< Template:Did you know nominations
Revision as of 16:40, 13 July 2017 by imported>Crosstemplejay (ex)
Jump to navigation Jump to search

David Asante-Apeatu

  • ALT1 ... that David Asante-Apeatu, a former Inspector of Factories, once oversaw an operation that lead to the seizure 588 kilograms of cocaine worth millions of dollars?

Created by Crosstemplejay (talk). Self-nominated at 12:36, 28 June 2017 (UTC).

  • Oppose The article reads like a CV. Furthermore, the proposed hook is poor. The article doesn't mention teaching, it trivialises police work, and as if that wasn't enough, the hook is essentially telling us that a policeman does police work and has a rank. You don't say. --Dweller (talk) Become old fashioned! 09:39, 13 July 2017 (UTC)
  • Though I do not agree with your assertion that the article reads like a CV, I have reworded certain sections of it and proposed an alternative hook. It is sometimes very difficulty writing an African article to be like a Western article due largely to lack of extensive coverage on penitent issues and individuals. Please go through and offer your opinion. CrossTemple Jay 16:38, 13 July 2017 (UTC)