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Ed Forchion
- … that activist Ed Forchion tried to legally change his name to NJWeedman.com, but was denied by courts in New Jersey and California?
Created by Djflem (talk). Self-nominated at 10:13, 23 May 2017 (UTC).
Long enough, new enough, sources check out fine, copyvio brings up only a quote, hook is interesting/cited, looks good to go. Just waiting for the QPQ. Zappa24Mati 00:52, 24 May 2017 (UTC)
Template:Ping and Template:Ping This needs additional work. There are a few citation request tags that I added because of stand-alone sentences/paragraphs. There is also a few instances of WP:CITEKILL. In addition, a lot of the references are incomplete and/or unreliable (i.e. lack publisher, dates when they were published, author/writer, are bare URLs, or are from the subject matter's website). The "Arrests and trials" section needs to be re-written as well. It has a bunch of one-sentence paragraphs. ComputerJA (☎ • ✎) 15:49, 26 May 2017 (UTC)
- Concerns have been addressed.Djflem (talk) 10:34, 30 May 2017 (UTC)
Great! Article looks in good shape now. Thank you for taking the time to work on my suggestions. I'm sure this catchy hook will attract a lot of views. ComputerJA (☎ • ✎) 13:26, 30 May 2017 (UTC)
- Concerns have been addressed.Djflem (talk) 10:34, 30 May 2017 (UTC)