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Erhard Egidi
- ... that Erhard Egidi conducted in 1990 at the Neustädter Kirche, Hannover, both the first performance after more than 300 years of a funeral music by the church's first organist, and Bach's Mass in B minor?
- Reviewed: Johann Christian Simon Handt
Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nominated at 14:00, 26 April 2013 (UTC).
- ALT 1: ... that Erhard Egidi conducted in 1990 both the first performance of a piece of funeral music that had been lost for 300 years and Bach's Mass in B minor?
- Otherwise the hook tries to say too much. Presume the citation [7] at the end of the paragraph covers the hook, but it needs appending to the actual statement; accepted on good faith, new, long enough and otherwise adequate. Please confirm acceptance of Alt hook or propose another. MasterOfHisOwnDomain (talk) 12:14, 10 May 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for looking. ALT1 has no indication of a place, also it was not the first performance of that funeral music.
- ALT2: ... that Erhard Egidi conducted in 1990 at the Neustädter Kirche, Hannover, both the first performance after more than 300 years of a funeral music and Bach's Mass in B minor? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:45, 10 May 2013 (UTC)
the article is right for size, age and hook. I think the music lost for 300 years is interesting. I can't see why we are trying to squeeze Bach's piece into the hook. Casliber (talk · contribs) 12:50, 14 May 2013 (UTC)
- Because Gerda loves Bach.PumpkinSky talk 11:17, 18 May 2013 (UTC)
- ALT3 ... that in 1990 at the Neustädter Kirche, Hannover, Erhard Egidi conducted the first performance after more than 300 years of a funeral music by the church's first organist? ... PumpkinSky talk 11:20, 18 May 2013 (UTC)
- It's not squeezing, it's establishing notability, because the Mass in B minor is known as one of the greatest (and most difficult) pieces, - whoever can conduct that has a certain stature. Also: the Mass is known as choral music, whereas funeral music could simply be instrumental. Trimming
- ALT4: ... that Erhard Egidi conducted at the Neustädter Kirche both the first performance after more than 300 years of a funeral music by the church's first organist and Bach's Mass in B minor? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:29, 18 May 2013 (UTC)