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Ethel Weed
- ... that U.S Army Lieutenant Ethel Weed was a pivotal figure in establishing women's rights in postwar Japan?
- Reviewed: Igwisi Hills
Created by Kaldari (talk). Self-nominated at 06:53, 6 April 2016 (UTC).
Article is long enough at 1703 ch and posted by due date. However, the first section of the article needs a citation. Hook is interesting. Text is neutral and there are no copy vio issues. QPQ done.Nvvchar. 13:56, 8 April 2016 (UTC)
- The first section is basically a summary/lead (although the article isn't yet divided into sections). There should be adequate citations to back it up in the rest of the article (per WP:LEADCITE). Kaldari (talk) 16:37, 8 April 2016 (UTC)
- Template:Ping What do you think? Kaldari (talk) 18:10, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- The dates in the first section any way need verification as they are not repeated in the rest of the article. The section as presented now cannot be considered as a lead sectionNvvchar. 01:37, 16 April 2016 (UTC)
I've added section headings and citations as needed to address these issues. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 06:11, 27 April 2016 (UTC)
- Template:Ping What do you think? Kaldari (talk) 18:10, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- The first section is basically a summary/lead (although the article isn't yet divided into sections). There should be adequate citations to back it up in the rest of the article (per WP:LEADCITE). Kaldari (talk) 16:37, 8 April 2016 (UTC)