Template:Did you know nominations/Fred Evans (boxer)

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Fred Evans (boxer)

5x expanded by Kosack (talk). Self-nominated at 13:11, 2 January 2020 (UTC).

  • I'll review this one. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 13:37, 4 January 2020 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg Checking with Earwig's copyvio Detector it shows a 23.7% chance of plagiarism. As you can see it is a word-for-word copy of the source. This should be reworded and put into your OWN words, not a copy of source. I'll finish reviewing after this is corrected. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 13:50, 4 January 2020 (UTC)
  • That part was part of the original version before I overhauled the page. I neglected to check that info, reworded now. Kosack (talk) 15:03, 4 January 2020 (UTC)
  • Thanks for rewording, however there is room for additional improvement. Could you do some more tweaking and then I will feel more comfortable that it is not close paraphrasing and won't be questioned by others. The wording I am concerned about is here in red. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 15:17, 4 January 2020 (UTC)
  • I've knocked it down a bit more. Kosack (talk) 15:24, 4 January 2020 (UTC)