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George Huebner
... that George Huebner was the chief engineer who developed the motor of first car powered with a gas turbine engine that was driven across the United States?
Created by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self-nominated at 11:12, 21 July 2017 (UTC).
- In my opinion, the hook makes for difficult reading. I suggest rewording it like below.
- ALT0a:... that George Huebner was the chief engineer who developed the motor of first gas turbine engine car which was driven across the United States?CrossTemple Jay 08:52, 24 July 2017 (UTC)
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- ALT1 :... that George Huebner is known as the 'father of the automotive gas turbine engine'?
- Source for ALT1 - University of Michigan obituary
- Template:Ping Withdrew my original hook, as ALT0a is much better worded. Submitted ALT1. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:03, 24 July 2017 (UTC)