Template:Did you know nominations/Janur Kuning

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Janur Kuning

Sudirman

  • ... that the titular coconut leaves in the war film Janur Kuning (Yellow Coconut Leaves) are a symbol of struggle?

Created by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 12:22, 29 December 2012 (UTC)

  • Symbol question.svg Length, date verified. No apparent paraphrasing issues. All refs appear to be RS. QPQ done. Interesting hook; its length is ok. Issues: (1) sentence to support hook lacks inline citation; (2) two non-lead paragraphs lack refs. --Rosiestep (talk) 17:02, 30 December 2012 (UTC)
  • Per DYKSG D2: "The article in general should use inline, cited sources. A rule of thumb is one inline citation per paragraph, excluding the intro, plot summaries, and paragraphs which summarize other cited content." (emphasis mine). As for the refs, I've duplicated the ref for the original hook; the ALT's ref is already okay — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:16, 30 December 2012 (UTC)