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Joe Kirby (teacher)

Created by Whispyhistory (talk) and Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Whispyhistory (talk) at 16:41, 20 November 2019 (UTC).

  • New enough, long enough and within policy (well cited, no close paraphrasing suspected). QPQ done. I don't really think ALT1 is very hooky. ALT0 is better, but I think it needs to say who Kirby is. Naming the book doesn't help and I find a little distracting. I suggest this tweak:
  • ALT2 ... that British education blogger Joe Kirby argues that teachers can avoid burnout by marking less homework?
Symbol question.svg MB 05:34, 29 November 2019 (UTC)
Thank you Template:Reply. Sorry for late reply. ALT2 ok with me. Whispyhistory (talk) 20:22, 3 December 2019 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg with ALT2. MB 20:35, 3 December 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Hi, I came by to promote this, but while the hook is making an active statement, that in the book Kirby is speaking about teachers, the article prose is not written that way at all; it sounds like avoiding burnout by having less marking is simply a byproduct of students' ability to do their homework. Here is the sentence in the article: Template:Tq. Yoninah (talk) 21:14, 22 December 2019 (UTC)