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John J. Loud

John J. Loud

Created by Connormah (talk). Self nominated at 08:20, 8 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Length and date OK. Citation for hook checks out. Image file checks out. It's a notable subject and I like the hook. Just a bit of tidying up to do. Please correct the disambig links in the article to "attorney", "tanner" and "Derby Academy". The external-links checker flags up citation no.12, although I cannot personally see what the problem is; the link works OK - might be worth checking with an expert or admin. Please change "practiced" to "practised". In the Personal Life section, the word "also" is used four times - could you rephrase some of this please? This is fundamentally a nicely researched and worthwhile article, so worth scrubbing up to look its best.--Storye book (talk) 11:44, 8 March 2014 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg Thank you for doing all that. Good to go. --Storye book (talk) 08:18, 9 March 2014 (UTC)