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Revision as of 18:54, 7 March 2019 by imported>Dushan Jugum (reply and edits to first comment)
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Judah Samet
- ... that "Happy Birthday" was sung to Judah Samet (pictured), a Holocaust survivor who narrowly escaped the Pittsburgh synagogue shooting, by attendees at Trump's 2019 State of the Union Address? Source: CBS News
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Final Fantasy XIV: Stormblood
- Comment:
I might add the photo, cropped of course.
Moved to mainspace by Wumbolo (talk). Self-nominated at 14:34, 5 March 2019 (UTC).
. This is my first review, see it as a test. The Hook is less than 200 characters, referenced inline and interesting. No copyright problems "Earwig's Copyvio Detector". The page is new enough and long enough. It is written in a neutral way. The image is from the US government. I would pass this with no problems. Two minor things to think about, but they do not need changing. The hook has 5 refences, maybe cut it down to your favourite 2. The 2 quotes at the end of paragraph starting On October 27… They seem to run together and while I can understand it, it could be made clearer. Great page. (Dushan Jugum (talk) 07:33, 7 March 2019 (UTC)).
- Template:Re Thanks for the review! I cut the references down to 2, but I don't understand what you mean about the quote. I also added a photo. If you approve the hook, you should write
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to produce a tick symbol. That lets patrolling editors know. wumbolo ^^^ 10:03, 7 March 2019 (UTC)- I am confident in your page and hook, but it would be nice to have another set of eyes as this is my first review. I made a “correction” for the “problem” of the two quotes. They seemed out of order. No problem with an undo on that edit. (Dushan Jugum (talk) 18:54, 7 March 2019 (UTC)).
- Template:Re Thanks for the review! I cut the references down to 2, but I don't understand what you mean about the quote. I also added a photo. If you approve the hook, you should write