Template:Did you know nominations/Louise Sophie Blussé

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Louise Sophie Blussé, Maria Leer, Stoffel Muller, Zwijndrechtse nieuwlichters

Maria Leer, 1863

Created by Drmies (talk), Rosiestep (talk). Nominated by Drmies (talk) at 01:45, 16 March 2015 (UTC).

  • Hehe; just a couple of hyphens where en dashes should be. Plus, of course, the hook length. It starts out about 305 characters, and even after applying rule C3, it's still about 255. ALT1 is an acceptable length; applying the same rule produces an effective hook length of 138. Now, I'm not suggesting anything (especially since the general mantra is "shorter is better"), but if you wanted to, you could expand on ALT1 by about 60 more characters to describe Zwijndrechtse nieuwlichters. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 20:32, 16 March 2015 (UTC)
  • Template:U, don't mind at all. It's at 226 now, but I'm hoping the the reviewer recognizes that the difficulty in limiting an (interesting) hook with 4 articles to 200 char. --Rosiestep (talk) 01:08, 17 March 2015 (UTC)