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Marni Abbott-Peter
... that Paralympic athlete Marni Abbott-Peter competed in Paralympic swimming before joining the Canada women's national wheelchair basketball team?Shrine selects athletes- ALT1:
... that Paralympic athlete Marni Abbott-Peter was inspired by Nancy Greene Raine to begin skiing?Marni Abbott - ALT2:
... that while recovering from a spinal cord injury, Marni Abbott-Peter was introduced to wheelchair sports by Rick Hansen?Paralympics helped restore athlete's dream of Olympics
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Created by HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk). Self-nominated at 22:41, 5 April 2019 (UTC).
- 16px Interesting life on good sources, no copyvio obvious. - Striking ALT2, but I confess to miss at least a hint at gold medals and/or hall of fame, - perhaps in combination. - In the article, please find a way to avoid two "while" in close succession. Also waiting for qpq. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:20, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
- Template:Re Thank you for beginning this review and nice catch with the wording. I have fixed the problem and will soon be completing QPQ. I am a little confused about your gold medals comment. Are you saying you think that should be the hook? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 20:43, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
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... that Paralympic athlete Marni Abbott-Peter won three gold medals and three consecutive World Championship titles with Team Canada?WHEELCHAIR BASKETBALL ATHLETE MARNI ABBOTT-PETER AND BUILDER DR. DONALD ROYER TO JOIN CANADIAN PARALYMPIC HALL OF FAME As a member of the Canadian Senior Women’s National Team from 1992-2004, she captured an unprecedented three consecutive gold medals at the Paralympic Games (1992, 1996 and 2000) as well as three consecutive world championship titles (1994, 1998 and 2002).- Well, you got what I meant, but now it's a bit too much for my taste. If I word the hook for you, I can't also review, so just food for thought: perhaps begin with her injury, and then the medals OR the world champion titles (medals is shorter), and I wouldn't pipe "wheelchair basketball". --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:50, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
- Template:Re Oh, I see what you mean. ALT4:
....that after a spinal cord injury, Marni Abbott-Peter won three Paralympic gold medals with Team Canada?HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 20:55, 10 April 2019 (UTC)- Getting there! Now just let's see her sport, - not just Team Canada. Take your time, off to sleep ;) - For your qpq: could you perhaps take a look at a nom I'd like to see on 12 April? It just needs approval of a hook or two. Search for the date, or "Patrick" ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:00, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
- Template:Re I don't feel right making that my QPQ since so many other people have commented on it and put much more work into assessing that article. I have reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Pokémon Go live events so QPQ is now done.
- ALT5:...that after a spinal cord injury, Marni Abbott-Peter won three Paralympic gold medals in Wheelchair Basketball with Team Canada? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 21:28, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
- ALT6: ... that after a spinal cord injury, Marni Abbott-Peter won three Paralympic gold medals in wheelchair basketball with Team Canada?
- ALT7: ... that after a spinal cord injury, Marni Abbott-Peter won three Paralympic gold medals with Canada women's national wheelchair basketball team?
- 16px I tried different links, please strike if not correct, or you don't like. As for the qpq, that's generous, but Lange still needs an approval! You could do that without counting. I supplied another alternative. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:21, 11 April 2019 (UTC)
- ALT5:...that after a spinal cord injury, Marni Abbott-Peter won three Paralympic gold medals in Wheelchair Basketball with Team Canada? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 21:28, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
- Template:Re I don't feel right making that my QPQ since so many other people have commented on it and put much more work into assessing that article. I have reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Pokémon Go live events so QPQ is now done.
- Getting there! Now just let's see her sport, - not just Team Canada. Take your time, off to sleep ;) - For your qpq: could you perhaps take a look at a nom I'd like to see on 12 April? It just needs approval of a hook or two. Search for the date, or "Patrick" ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:00, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
- Template:Re Oh, I see what you mean. ALT4:
- Well, you got what I meant, but now it's a bit too much for my taste. If I word the hook for you, I can't also review, so just food for thought: perhaps begin with her injury, and then the medals OR the world champion titles (medals is shorter), and I wouldn't pipe "wheelchair basketball". --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:50, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
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- Template:Re Thank you for beginning this review and nice catch with the wording. I have fixed the problem and will soon be completing QPQ. I am a little confused about your gold medals comment. Are you saying you think that should be the hook? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 20:43, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
