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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 20:41, 11 January 2020 (UTC)

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Megan Fisher

Created by HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk). Self-nominated at 19:40, 12 December 2019 (UTC).

  • 16px In depth-review of article to come. Otherwise: article was nominated same day as creation and over 1500 bytes of prose. For the hook, it's under 200 characters, interesting, netural and cited. QPQ is needed as stated by nominator. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 20:42, 22 December 2019 (UTC)

Prose check:

  • 18px Done With the Montana Kaimin source: 1) Fisher grew up near Calgary, not in Calgary 18px Done 2) Her parents separated, not divorced 16px Confirmed 3) It doesn't specify if Fisher did spend time with her dad while he lived in Canada/Philippines.16px Confirmed
  • Montanan isn't specific that the University of Montana tennis team played in the NCAA Division I.18px Not done
  • 18px DoneThe Bicycle Story is self published and can't be used per WP:SELFPUBLISH as it's about a living person.18px Not done
  • 18px Done"She met Paralympic cyclist Sam Kavanaugh who inspired her to begin competing with the USA Paralympic team" - not exact with Missoulian. Kavanaugh's meeting with Fisher led her to try to get a spot on the Paralympic team. She didn't automatically get on the team, as Fisher said it took her a few years before she made it.Template:Not sure Template:Ns0
  • 18px Done "In 2010, Fisher competed in the TRI-5 classification at the International Triathlon Union Paratriathlon World Championship in Budapest, Hungary," - Fisher won the event, not just competed.16px Confirmed
    • 18px Done"and won the 2010 USA Paratriathlon National Championship in the TRI-5 category" - slight rewording need as it's word for word copy in order to pass limited wording.18px Not done
  • 18px Done"She also became the first female with a lower leg amputation to complete an XTERRA off-road triathlon." - I think a bit of rewording would be useful for limited wording, as it's the same word order and closely resembles the sentence.18px Not done
  • 18px Done "Fisher began working towards a doctorate in physical therapy at the University of Washington." - I think the "working towards a doctorate" part should be slightly rephraed for limited wording.16px Confirmed
  • 18px Done "In London, she competed in Paralympic cycling where she won both a gold and silver medal" - yes, but this doesn't support the specific 2012 events listed in the infobox. I suggest adding an extra source that does says which events, as the 2016 medals mention which specific events.18px Not done
  • 18px Done "As a result of winning her third world championship title" - true. I recommend clarifying it was the 2013 ITU Paratriathlon World Championships, as Fisher's article only lists two at the time of her USOC award.18px Not done
  • 18px Done Wheelchair Sports Federation says Fisher's bronze was in the C4 3000M individual pursuit event, not 100 track pursuit.18px Not done

16px Overall: a bit of work needs to be done with prose edits, some rewording to pass limited wording, and one source needs to be replaced due to WP:SELFPUBLISH about a BLP. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 22:14, 22 December 2019 (UTC)

Template:U Thanks for the review. I am on vacation with just my mobile but will try and fix this ASAP.HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 22:20, 22 December 2019 (UTC)
Template:U QPQ done and issues addressed. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 00:32, 30 December 2019 (UTC)
Template:Ping Some more work needed as some of these points haven't been addressed yet. I see you've done a QPQ, so that part is resolved. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 01:12, 30 December 2019 (UTC)
Template:U, could you elaborate on what needs to be fixed? I changed it to 3000M, added the exact relay etc. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 01:14, 30 December 2019 (UTC)
Template:U The ones that still need to be worked on have the red X, red question mark and purple question mark next to them. In regards to your 2 specific questions: the 2016 bronze medal was 3000M individual pursuit per Cycling at the 2016 Summer Paralympics – Women's individual pursuit C4. Both the prose/infobox require updating. For 2012 Summer Paralympics, the Triathlon source doesn't verify the exact medals that are in the infobox, just that they were a gold and silver. If you require further explanation to the individual parts that need additional edits per the above points, let me know. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 01:23, 30 December 2019 (UTC)
Template:U, I believe I have addressed your issues. I hope "She also became the first female lower leg amputee to complete an XTERRA off-road triathlon" is a good enough rewording. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 05:09, 7 January 2020 (UTC)
Template:Ping According to the article history, the article hasn't been edited since December 29th. The reason why I mentioned this is because of your comment today, but I haven't seen any new edits since then. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 20:10, 7 January 2020 (UTC)
Oh I’m so daft, I did it elsewhere. The holidays are getting to me. Give me an hour or so. So sorry about that. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 20:27, 7 January 2020 (UTC)
Template:U, No actually my comment was right. I checked over my edits and think I completed everything December 29 before I left again on holiday. I planned on re-evaluating everything when I came back but I think I tweaked everything. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 22:30, 7 January 2020 (UTC)
Template:Ping I see. In that case, I'll be more specific on what's left to be done from the above list:
  • "at the University of Montana's NCAA tennis team," - "NCAA" needs to be dropped as Montanan does not mention this specific word. 18px Not done (found source that said this)
  • The Bicycle Story source cannot be used in this article as this is a self-published source on a living person. This is currently being cited at the end of the second leg surgery sentence.18px Done
  • Her third world championship title was the 2013 ITU Paratriathlon World Championships, not the 2013 UCI Para-cycling Road World Championships per the Team USA source.18px Done
  • Wheelchair Sports Federation says her 2016 Paralympic Bronze was at the 3000M individual pursuit, not the 300 track pursuit. This also needs to be updated in the infobox.18px Done
  • The two makred Not done for now and Not sure I've changed my mind about, so you can skip those as they're fine.

--MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 22:46, 7 January 2020 (UTC)

Template:U Nice find with the KPAX source! Only one minor point left. The Bronze medal was 3000 not 300 per "Her teammate Megan Fisher also took a bronze home at the C4 3000M individual pursuit". --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 22:57, 7 January 2020 (UTC)
16px And i see you tweaked that last one. All set Template:U! --

MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 22:59, 7 January 2020 (UTC)

  • (edit conflict) Template:U, Fixed! I just want to also say thank you so much for doing an in-depth review of this article. While I know it can be taxing and I am not as responsive as I usually am due to the holidays, I appreciate the patience and diligence you have displayed. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 23:00, 7 January 2020 (UTC)
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