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Revision as of 19:47, 15 May 2012 by imported>Muboshgu (any response?)
Mei Baojiu
- ... that as a child Mei Baojiu had such a beautiful appearance and delicate voice that his father sent him to study Peking opera?
- Reviewed: I will review some later
- Comment: Nanjing Normal University class project moved to article space on 13 April 2012
Created/expanded by NNUR06KceniaXie5090624 (talk), NNUR06ConiaWei5090627 (talk), NNUR06BikaJiang5090623 (talk). Nominated by Graeme Bartlett (talk) at 08:46, 15 April 2012 (UTC)
- Serious problems with this article, primarily NPOV language and essay-like style, as well as whole paragraphs with no citations. Hook is not particularly interesting, either; many precocious children are sent to study their craft at young ages, so what makes him unique? – Muboshgu (talk) 17:02, 2 May 2012 (UTC)
- not to mention lousy refs, including bare urls. PumpkinSky talk 02:14, 6 May 2012 (UTC)
- I have cleaned up some POV language, embellished the references so that there are no bare URLs, and cited all the paragraphs.
- alt1 ... that Mei Baojiu is the leader of the Mei Lanfang Peking Opera troupe?
- How about alt1 hook? Graeme Bartlett (talk) 10:27, 7 May 2012 (UTC)
Family section is unreferenced. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:17, 8 May 2012 (UTC)
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- Yes somehow I missed that too. I have asked User talk:NNUR06BikaJiang5090623 who wrote that paragraph where the information came from. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 10:22, 9 May 2012 (UTC)