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Mount Carmel East
... that the land that is now Mount Carmel East was originally used as a farm that provided food for another hospital, Mount Carmel West?- ALT1: ... that Mount Carmel East sits on land that was originally used as a farm that provided food for another hospital, Mount Carmel West? Mount Carmel Health
- Reviewed: Pinewood Hospital
- Comment: Open to any other hooks that people think could be better
Improved to Good Article status by Sixflashphoto (talk). Self-nominated at 05:30, 11 May 2018 (UTC).
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- Good Idea. -- Sixflashphoto (talk) 13:55, 12 May 2018 (UTC)
Looks good, but I think the hook could be rewritten a bit to flow better: ... that Mount Carmel East sits on land that was originally used as a farm that provided food for another hospital, Mount Carmel West? SounderBruce 20:28, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Re Good idea for the hook, thank you! -- Sixflashphoto (talk) 03:29, 14 May 2018 (UTC)
- Good Idea. -- Sixflashphoto (talk) 13:55, 12 May 2018 (UTC)