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Pan Am Flight 923
- ... that although Pan Am Flight 923 was the deadliest commercial aviation accident in Alaska at the time, the cause of the crash remains unknown?
- Reviewed: Sahara Hospital
- Comment: Referenced facts can be found in subsections 'Investigation' and 'Probable Cause'.
Moved to mainspace by Mukkakukaku (talk). Self nominated at 06:23, 18 November 2013 (UTC).
Date, size, refs, neutrality are fine. I added a cite request to the sentence with the hook claim "dedliest", once this is fixed ping me and this should be GTG. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:23, 19 November 2013 (UTC)
- The two adjacent sentences in that paragraph share the same reference: "At the time of the crash, Pan Am Flight 923 was the deadliest crash in Alaskan commercial aviation. Furthermore, it was the first crash of a Pan American four-engined aircraft." (Reference is the article called "Air Crash Kills 6 in Family.") I was under the impression that if two adjacent sentences share the same reference, they can be bundled into one to reduce clutter. Mûĸĸâĸûĸâĸû (blah?) 05:35, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
- On second thought I really don't care to argue the point. Sentences reordered so that the factoid in the DYK nomination has the reference on it directly. Mûĸĸâĸûĸâĸû (blah?) 05:37, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
- @User:Mukkakukaku It's not required but consider this. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:02, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
Looks good now. GTG. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:02, 20 November 2013 (UTC)