Template:Did you know nominations/Part II (On the Run)

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Part II (On the Run)

Knowles performing on the I Am... Tour with Jay-Z, who she married in 2008 after several years of friendship and dating

Created/expanded by My love is love (talk). Self nominated at 17:55, 16 July 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg The euphemism "make love" should be replaced with "have sex"; alternatively, there should be quotation marks because the phrase appears in the lyrics. The article appears to be properly sourced, along with the hook. It amazes me that so much can be written about a song that's only a few days old. Nice job. Surtsicna (talk) 23:15, 19 July 2013 (UTC)
I added quotation marks. Thank you. My love is love (talk) 00:05, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg I have pulled this one from prep as the hook fact is unremarkable, I would like to see a stronger hook for this nomination. Gatoclass (talk) 12:26, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
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I have registered an objection to the original hook so it should not be re-promoted without a clear consensus. ALT2 has a similar problem as the original hook IMO - it's a commonplace statement and thus not at all remarkable. Since there seems to be an agreement that ALT1 is acceptable, that should be the hook of choice. Gatoclass (talk) 13:37, 20 July 2013 (UTC)
Yes, ALT1 is definitely better. I approved the original hook because it did not seem to me that a better one could be found, but I was obviously wrong. Surtsicna (talk) 13:56, 20 July 2013 (UTC)