Template:Did you know nominations/Philip Egner

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Philip Egner

Created by LavaBaron (talk). Self-nominated at 19:24, 14 May 2016 (UTC).

Endorse Moriori's ALT1, strike the primary hook. LavaBaron (talk) 00:52, 15 May 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg This article is new enough and long enough. The article is neutral and my spot checks did not bring up any copyright issues. However, I do not like either of the hooks, because they give no indication that the article is the biography of someone. Why not use the On, Brave Old Army Team connection, or if you prefer the woman conductor angle, at least mention Egner's name in the hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:30, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

Symbol confirmed.svg New enough, long enough, no close paraphrasing, neutral, sourced. Hook: for reasons given by Cwmhiraeth eiter ALT2a or ALT2b work best, short enough, sourced. GTG. Aymatth2 (talk) 19:27, 19 June 2016 (UTC)