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Poralia, Discomedusae

5x expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self-nominated at 05:54, 24 May 2018 (UTC).

  • "Poralia rufescens, a deepwater discomedusan jellyfish, is so lacking in nutritional value that the leatherback sea turtle "feeds only on its gonads and tentacles'"?
  • Members of the order Rhizostomae are collectively known as "root-mouth jellies" and are very diverse. They do not have tentacles ??
  • What are gonads? Why is such a word not linked?
  • Yes, thanks. I see the confusion now, the link "discomedusan jellyfish" brings me to "Discomedusae" and there it speaks of "Rhizostomae". Maybe better to link to Semaestomae directly? And the gonad article needs some work, great to have that trigger now. Cheers, Tisquesusa (talk) 14:29, 24 May 2018 (UTC)
The link goes to Discomedusae because that is the second of the two articles I have expanded and nominated in this hook. The article gonad I only linked because you asked me to do so, and I agree that it is in need of improvement. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:13, 24 May 2018 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Full review needed of both articles. BlueMoonset (talk) 06:05, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
  • Both articles were sufficiently expanded, in time for nomination, QPQ satisfied for the two articles, hook is short enough and seems interesting enough, images correctly licensed, cites sources.
  • Issues:
  • In Poralia, Capone 2008, it doesn't seem to clearly indicate that the turtles are feeding on Poralia, or if they are, that they feed this way on many jellyfish species.
  • In Discomedusae, "a large surface area of [missing word?] with which" - seems to be missing a word after "of"
I still need to spot check the other sources. Chris857 (talk) 20:34, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
I agree that the observation on eating gonads and tentacles does not necessarily refer to Poralia, although because it has such a low nutritional value, it probably does. Perhaps we need a different hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:04, 15 June 2018 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg Given the issues raised with the hook, this doesn't need a new reviewer at the moment, but that new hook Cwmhiraeth alluded to. Chris857, have you completed those spot checks yet? BlueMoonset (talk) 04:19, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
Template:Ping It's difficult to tie in the leatherback turtles, so how about ALT2? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:56, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
Template:Ping Thank you. I have added Phacellophoridae. That section was already in the article when I started expanding it, and I didn't check to see if it was correct. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:33, 6 July 2018 (UTC)
Symbol voting keep.svg Alright, both articles good to go now. Chris857 (talk) 13:40, 6 July 2018 (UTC)