Template:Did you know nominations/Reviving Baseball in Inner Cities

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Reviving Baseball in Inner Cities‎

  • Reviewed: IOU

Created by Muboshgu (talk). Self nominated at 00:46, 7 June 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg The response took place decades ago, so it would sound better written in the past tense. I would suggest providing a citation for the year the organization was founded, and then saying "... program was founded in 1989 in response ..." Also "African American" should be hyphenated (see MOS:HYPHEN) since it is an adjective. QPQ is outstanding as well.—Bagumba (talk) 02:11, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
  • I like it better as a a noun. QPQ coming soon. – Muboshgu (talk) 14:26, 8 June 2013 (UTC)