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Riobamba (nightclub)
... that the Riobamba, where Frank Sinatra made his solo nightclub debut in 1943, was owned by Mafia boss Louis "Lepke" Buchalter?
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... that within a week of debuting at the Riobamba nightclub as an "extra added attraction", Frank Sinatra was attracting SRO audiences and the top-billed act had quit? - Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Frank Sinatra Enterprises
- Comment: For December 12 Frank Sinatra centenary. Note to reviewer: Unbeknownst to each other, SusunW created Riobamba Club at 20:22, 9 November 2015 and Yoninah created Riobamba (nightclub) at 01:10, 10 November 2015. We agreed to boldly merge the articles and are nominating this with co-creation credits.
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Created by SusunW (talk) and Yoninah (talk). Nominated by Yoninah (talk) at 16:01, 10 November 2015 (UTC).
Nice article on a Sinatra topic on good sources, extra praise for collaboration in merging and ano-fuss-infobox! I confess that I find the hooks too complex. If it's about Sinatra it could be simply:
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... Frank Sinatra made his night-club debut at the Riobamba? - I would also be interested in the song of the same name by Bernstein, and in the trembling lips which brought the house down. Suggestions? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:28, 21 November 2015 (UTC)
- ALT3: ... that at his solo nightclub debut at the Riobamba, Frank Sinatra (pictured) sang two songs "with trembling lips" and brought the house down? Yoninah (talk) 21:45, 21 November 2015 (UTC)
Like that, let's try, pictured? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:19, 21 November 2015 (UTC)
- Template:Ping thanks for the review. The idea is to run the lead hook, Template:Did you know nominations/Frank Sinatra, at the top of both sets over the 24-hour period. Yoninah (talk) 22:43, 21 November 2015 (UTC)
- I would prefer to have him young the first 12 hours, older the second, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:32, 22 November 2015 (UTC)
